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    My latest track. Any thoughts?

    Wondering if this sounds at least close to being releasable?

    ddemosmd - Debo - ID - SoundCloud

    would love to hear your thoughts!
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    Just listened to your ID.

    Good intro, love the uplifting breakdown, but I seem to miss a big climax after the breakdown (I mean, it's just like the beat is re-introduced after the breakdown).

    Don't get me wrong, I'm not critisising you (I couldn't do it any better), just want to give my honest opinion.

    I think it's a very nice second attempt, but you have little work on it.

    But again, my honest opinion.

    BTW, you used FL studio???

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    no need to be preemptively defensive BD! =) I rather appreciate the feedback! You're not the first one to say my build-up needs work! maybe snare roll or something, and a more rapid build-up? dunno. i'll get it right one of these times =P
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    Edit - yes I used FL Studio. Learning it a little more with each track I do! I have trouble getting the mix-down to sound good, but this is the best I've done I think by a long shot
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    I think when you adapt the beatsection after the breakdown to a more powerwul climax, this will become a very nice track!!

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    Well I have to say this is very good indeed. A lovely production. Nothing over the top. But a nice melody and good percussion in all the right places made it a good listen. Really just a lovely tune. Well made without any noticable flaws. If I were you I would leave it as it is. And just goes to show what can be done in Fruity Loops. Well done indeed
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    Not bad, not bad at all.

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    thank you guys! very encouraging, and I am glad that somebody is actually listening! sunny, really appreciate your thoughts! and thank you also, perleth! will keep producing, you all just keep listening!
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