Just listened to your ID.
Good intro, love the uplifting breakdown, but I seem to miss a big climax after the breakdown (I mean, it's just like the beat is re-introduced after the breakdown).
Don't get me wrong, I'm not critisising you (I couldn't do it any better), just want to give my honest opinion.
I think it's a very nice second attempt, but you have little work on it.
But again, my honest opinion.
BTW, you used FL studio???